brokenbase | How's My Driving: Count Troyard Edition

Slaine is a walking matryoshka doll of issues underneath his baby-faced looks, and as such I appreciate all feedback concerning my portrayal of this character! Praises and constructive criticism are love, but flames and vague wordings are unnecessary. Please elaborate on what I need to work on so I can improve! And by that, I mean give examples. I don't expect links, but something like "I'm concerned about this thread with so-and-so, which gives me the impression of x" should suffice.

All comments screened ♔ Anonymous enabled ♔ IP logging off